More NaNoWriMo
Nov. 9th, 2006 07:07 amMore about human culture as viewed by twofers, and Jake is visited again by Dent.
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Date: 2006-11-09 06:01 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-11-09 06:14 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-11-09 07:53 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-11-09 08:06 pm (UTC)Actually, most of the damage to US cities was caused by internal fighting between different regions of the US, and not by externals at all, though the external attacks helped break down the tissue of order that had prevented such things up until that time.
I'm glad you find an unpolished draft that interesting. I've been a writer for quite a few years, and published very little fiction. One might think that technical writing is a very different species, but I find that it is not. Of course you have to have an idea to make fiction, but the same rules apply to the communication. I have a running list of technical faults in this that must be corrected, too. Thanks for the input. I'm rarely sure that anyone is reading at all.
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Date: 2006-11-09 08:14 pm (UTC)I look forward to reading more. ^)^ There just isn't enough work out there with the word 'flehmen' in it for my taste.
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Date: 2006-11-09 08:15 pm (UTC)*giggles* OK, so I'm just pulling your leg. There's a world of difference between writing erotically and acting it out.
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Date: 2006-11-09 10:38 pm (UTC)Innocence doesn't mean not knowing something, so much as it means not thinking of it. I still qualify most of the time.
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Date: 2006-11-09 10:43 pm (UTC)I disagree. Rather that thinking of it, I think that acting upon the thought would mean that you've crossed the line. And, for the record, I still don't buy it, stallion. You've lived too long to be 'innocent'. ^)^
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Date: 2006-11-09 10:49 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-11-09 11:10 pm (UTC)When I hear someone talk about being innocent, my brain immediately jumps to the word 'naive'. It might be contextually unfair, but that's how this horse's mind seems to work. I don't have an explanation for this, and it's not intentional - it just is. Naive isn't a word that I apply to you. Perhaps that's why I have trouble swallowing the innocent Clyde line?
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Date: 2006-11-10 03:55 am (UTC)